Shroud:Chapter 7 outlined

Aha, finally worked my way through chapter 7, last night at writing group. The writing and characterization seem a bit more solid here, though there are several places where I put in reminders to add more scenes, and just went on and wrote the importantish plot parts.

There are also some continuity issues, but that’s bound to happen when you write 50,000 words in 30 days without looking back. I find myself giggling quite a bit over things I wrote, half asleep, in a desperate attempt to win Nanwrimo with words.

I don’t think I have all that much left to outline left. I’m into chapter 8, and running out of scrollbar.

After the outlining is done, then the real work begins. Printing out the outline, seeing what I have, where scenes are needed, which ones can just be tossed, and what order.

kinda exciting.

See more progress on: Edit My novel

Shroud:Chapter 7 outlined

Aha, finally worked my way through chapter 7, last night at writing group. The writing and characterization seem a bit more solid here, though there are several places where I put in reminders to add more scenes, and just went on and wrote the importantish plot parts.

There are also some continuity issues, but that’s bound to happen when you write 50,000 words in 30 days without looking back. I find myself giggling quite a bit over things I wrote, half asleep, in a desperate attempt to win Nanwrimo with words.

I don’t think I have all that much left to outline left. I’m into chapter 8, and running out of scrollbar.

After the outlining is done, then the real work begins. Printing out the outline, seeing what I have, where scenes are needed, which ones can just be tossed, and what order.

kinda exciting.

See more progress on: Edit My novel

Amazing! Giant Marionette and Animatronic Elephant!

I can't get over how cool this whole thing is:
"Residents of Nantes, France woke to a space capsule crashed into a smoking pile of rubble in the central square of the city. Later that day, a giant animatronic elephant and entourage of the Sultan paraded into town to visit the mayor." From IDFuel via Gizmodo

You have to click this link, and check out every page of these pictures:

http://www.nantes.fr/ext/royal_de_luxe_2005/

more picture here, with english comments http://www.lean.to/gallery/royaldeluxe?page=1

and some on flickr
http://www.flickr.com/photos/tags/royaldeluxe/
Jwz also covered this: http://jwz.livejournal.com/488113.html there are some interesting comments attached.

Beautiful and amazing!

Amazing! Giant Marionette and Animatronic Elephant!

I can't get over how cool this whole thing is:
"Residents of Nantes, France woke to a space capsule crashed into a smoking pile of rubble in the central square of the city. Later that day, a giant animatronic elephant and entourage of the Sultan paraded into town to visit the mayor." From IDFuel via Gizmodo

You have to click this link, and check out every page of these pictures:

http://www.nantes.fr/ext/royal_de_luxe_2005/

more picture here, with english comments http://www.lean.to/gallery/royaldeluxe?page=1

and some on flickr
http://www.flickr.com/photos/tags/royaldeluxe/
Jwz also covered this: http://jwz.livejournal.com/488113.html there are some interesting comments attached.

Beautiful and amazing!